YOU+ME=WE

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Fingers intertwined together, I slowly feel your breath
As you pull me closer to kiss on my neck.
"You are beautiful" you whisper as you clutch my face with both your hands
I see a reflection of the love in your eyes which fairytales speak about.
There is nothing else that can describe the magic that we share
Our hearts are muted as our souls bare.
There is a silent music to which our bodies sway
Unearthing deep corners of our heart where our desires lay
I close my eyes letting your fingers caress my face
You grab my waist not letting me shy away from your gaze.
You play with my hair creating ripples in my soul,
Slowly connecting all the dots and making me whole.

I shake my head as I realise I am dreaming once again. We are miles away from each other yet so near... I just have to close my eyes to feel your breath next to mine!

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  1. Swarnali16 November 2012 at 12:59

    Wow....that was beautiful...crisp and poignant...loved it :)

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    1. Privy Trifles16 November 2012 at 17:44

      Thanks so much Swarnali....glad you loved it!

      I tried writing something like this for the first time though :)

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  2. Vinay Leo R.18 November 2012 at 19:12

    Quite beautiful in its little length.. good first time attempt too, Privy :)

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    1. Privy Trifles19 November 2012 at 12:44

      Thank you Leo.. this coming from you means a lot! :)

      Welcome here, hope to see you more often!

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  3. Meoww19 November 2012 at 05:33

    That is one wonderful post! <3

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  4. Aswathy19 November 2012 at 13:23

    cute and touching poem..loved it :)

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  5. Bikram20 November 2012 at 20:33

    and isnot that pure loveeeeeeeeeeeeeee...

    when you can close your eyes and feel the person right there


    Bikram's

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    1. Privy Trifles22 November 2012 at 09:58

      Yess..... it is the purest and truest form of love when even distances don't matter! :)

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  6. Unknown23 November 2012 at 00:29

    the feeling of loving someone so intensely discounts even the absence of beloved

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    1. Privy Trifles24 November 2012 at 19:35

      Very true Anjan... thanks so much for being here...appreciate your follow too!

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  7. pravir7 June 2013 at 12:38

    Pure love doesn't see distance.so so romantic poem for true love.

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