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Fingers intertwined together, I slowly feel your breath
As you pull me closer to kiss on my neck.
"You are beautiful" you whisper as you clutch my face with both your hands
I see a reflection of the love in your eyes which fairytales speak about.
There is nothing else that can describe the magic that we share
Our hearts are muted as our souls bare.
There is a silent music to which our bodies sway
Unearthing deep corners of our heart where our desires lay
I close my eyes letting your fingers caress my face
You grab my waist not letting me shy away from your gaze.
You play with my hair creating ripples in my soul,
Slowly connecting all the dots and making me whole.
I shake my head as I realise I am dreaming once again. We are miles away from each other yet so near... I just have to close my eyes to feel your breath next to mine!
Wow....that was beautiful...crisp and poignant...loved it :)
ReplyDeleteThanks so much Swarnali....glad you loved it!
DeleteI tried writing something like this for the first time though :)
Quite beautiful in its little length.. good first time attempt too, Privy :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Leo.. this coming from you means a lot! :)
DeleteWelcome here, hope to see you more often!
That is one wonderful post! <3
ReplyDeleteThanks Meoww :)
Deletecute and touching poem..loved it :)
ReplyDeleteThank you!! :)))
Deleteand isnot that pure loveeeeeeeeeeeeeee...
ReplyDeletewhen you can close your eyes and feel the person right there
Bikram's
Yess..... it is the purest and truest form of love when even distances don't matter! :)
Deletethe feeling of loving someone so intensely discounts even the absence of beloved
ReplyDeleteVery true Anjan... thanks so much for being here...appreciate your follow too!
DeletePure love doesn't see distance.so so romantic poem for true love.
ReplyDeleteTrue Pravir,
Deletethanks!