Memories

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I remember those moments spent with you---in evenings full of hue.
The look in your eyes, the words of care--- a love so true and so rare!
Silent whispers, sweet-nothings and those cherished moments filled with hope.
Made me realise that I am tied to you with love rope.

Thinking about you - wishing you were here,
Feeling as if you are around me....so far yet to near...
The moments spent with you are so few, 
But they seem to glisten in my thoughts like drops of dew.

Every touch, every word, every look makes me feel like never before
I wish the time could stop there and you could be with me some more.
Lying in your arms, feeling your breath next to mine..listening to your voice, 
Seeing stars in your eyes which shine...makes me fall in love with you all over again!

This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda

Comments

  1. Anonymous24 November 2012 at 20:20

    Nice poem .. such powerful feelings .. :)

    Also catch out my enrty
    http://ankitmahato.blogspot.in/2012/11/strolling-down-memory-lane.html

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  2. Unknown24 November 2012 at 20:53

    You know the best compliment you can give to any poet is : "i felt it"

    n i really felt the emotions in it...!!!

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    1. Privy Trifles24 November 2012 at 23:34

      Wow!! Thank you so much...this one truly means a lot to Me :)

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  3. Aswathy24 November 2012 at 21:52

    nice one..i loved the pic,cute roses..

    and on the last line theres a small correction "seeing stars in your eyes which shine " :)

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    1. Privy Trifles24 November 2012 at 23:35

      Thanks that is actually a candle..gifted to me by a very special friend :)

      Rectified - thanks!

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  4. rudraprayaga25 November 2012 at 00:30

    Nice feeling.

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  5. Panchali25 November 2012 at 19:39

    Me!! At last, I got you !! Awww, this is such a romantic piece...!Beautifully written :)

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    1. Privy Trifles25 November 2012 at 22:09

      :)

      Awww Panchaliji...that is really sweet of you to say that. Well this is my second blog where I write poems and book reviews!

      Thanks for stopping by.. <3

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  6. Unknown25 November 2012 at 22:29

    Such a beautiful picture. What is it made of?
    You lines are dipped in love and made me romantic <3

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    1. Privy Trifles25 November 2012 at 22:34

      Thanks so much Ghazala...actually it a wax candle gifted to me . It is so beautiful that I never felt like even removing its packing...and yes one look at it and even I am all romantic <3

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